This is a paragraph from my free draft of the Arts Role in Science essay. I’ve highlighted all of the key terms, pointing terms, and transition words. I didn’t have any pointing terms, I should keep that in mind when I revise my paper. I’ve noticed I’v repeated a lot of my key terms not only in that paragraph but also in my entire essay. My essay is about art and science, but maybe I should reduce the number of times I repeat them. I seem to rely heavily on my key terms.
This is a good start. I would have also liked for you to examine how you transition from paragraph to paragraph and idea to idea. Consider keeping this in mind as you reflect on future essays. 2/3