For media in my final project I plan to use different pictures throughout the essay. I’ll have different pictures that are in direct contrast with each other, like an example of what is beautiful and something that isn’t to be able to compare and contrast them to each other for a better visual effect. I also plan on citing different articles about beauty, here are a couple of examples.
https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC2699193/
https://www.huffingtonpost.com/lexi-herrick/what-is-the-real-definition-of-beauty_b_8117790.html
- Introduction about Beauty
- 1st Paragraph–Talk about Society’s view of beauty, cite a beauty magazine
- 2nd Paragraph–Talk about my view on art, cite Lehrer
- 3rd Paragraph–Talk about Schiller, cite Schiller
- Include pictures of beauty with explanations throughout
Good start on ideas. The basics are there, it only being an outline obviously we can’t see everything you are going to write about. However I would add connecting paragraphs, something to connect your own ideas to that of the text. Also any naysayer paragraphs would help further any argument that you want to make. Also within your outline, I don’t see your argument it is mostly just a 3 paragraph paper explaining things. Add places for your argument to develop, that will help you expand on your ideas.
I agree with Jayke, that it’s a little hard to work with this outline’s few details, but I would warn you to watch out for the old “five paragraph” trap. Don’t write about one source, pivot, write about another source, and then tie them all together.
I would also recommend narrowing your focus a bit, as this will help you stick to your own argument.
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